How delightful to write again from a visual prompt from Magpie Tales!
Earlier today, before I even saw the prompt, I had a discussion with my interior about using forms, specifically the pantoum form, because it is like a mixing spoon, bringing words up and over one another slowly, methodically until they become a delectable bite to eat. (Perhaps it is the opening line that brings forth the food metaphor.)Thank you for visiting & reading. I always love your comments more than you can imagine!
One spoonful moves, involuntarily
Blue shirted man lifts its yellowness
Resolute in his assertion all hay must
I must insure hay serves its intended purpose
Blue shirted man lifts its yellowness
Unpopped corn kernals, dried tears left behind
“I must insure hay serves its intended purpose”
Are the sunflower pimples stubborn or surrendered?
Unpopped corn kernals, dried tears left behind
Words not even standing, waiting, beside the edge of her lip
Are the sunflower pimples stubborn or surrendered?
They don’t even know the feeling of a pencil or air or
Words not even standing, waiting, beside the edge of her lip
Julie Jordan Scott has been a Life & Creativity Coach, Writer, Facilitator and Teleclass Leader since 1999. She is also an award winning Actor, Director, Artist and Mother Extraordinaire. She was twice the StoryTelling Slam champion in Bakersfield. She leads Writing Camp with JJS & this Summer will be traveling throughout the US to bring this unique, fun filled creative experience to the people wherever she finds the passion & the interest.
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