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September 21, 2014


Ginny Brannan

"Chin down but not for long.'

"Not for long" for me sets the tone for this, for indeed, this woman is stronger than he who would try to define, to limit her. Well written and captured.

Theresa Milstein

I like the message here: One step at a time. Don't look too far ahead.

Karen S.

I completely feel this!

Tess Kincaid

Adore the word galoshes...was hoping someone would use it!


perfect repetition, love the strong & hopeful tone!


I can still see my feet.

Love how you symbolically hold your ground through this sentence :)

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