The rhythm is all around me
Bum Boom Bum Boom Bum Boom
Red walls or red blanket or red.... what?
Can't seem to discern the relevant words
In retelling this pre-language tale.
Bum Boom Bum Boom Bum Boom
I am here -
You are here -
We are here -
All is good -
We are safe -
There is love -
There is love -
There is love -
I hear what I now know are voices.
I feel what I now know are my mother's hands,
touching my red blanket home,
caressing my red blanket home,
my red blanket home touches and
caresses me.
My thumb in my mouth takes
that caress and translates it into
comfort -
bum boom bum boom bum boom.
all is well -
all is well -
all is well -
Love is here.
Love is here -
Love is here -
Poetry lived with me
in my mother's womb.
There was never a choice
there simply was:
love love love -
prelanguage notions
of poetry translated
by crayon three years later.
My mother copied letters with love
My little self copied straight lines and curves.
Bum Boom Bum Boom Bum Boom
Poetry has been my forever companion
Never leaves me.
Never chooses anyone else.
Caresses my neck when it is tight.
Covers me with a blanket when my
feet are cold.
Bum Boom, Bum Boom, Bum Boom.....
-- Julie Jordan Scott
You have an amazing art of writing. The art i loved. And remembering the first poetry written is a joy in itself. And this joy is captured so beautifully.
Superb Writing :)
Posted by: Ankit Sharma | October 03, 2013 at 10:26 AM
Oh, Julie, I love this! Yes, it is born into us - the rhythm, the comfort, the love of words... This is truly special.
Posted by: Amy | October 03, 2013 at 12:39 PM
Thanks so much for stopping Julie! I speak Hindi./Urdu! That's what the poem is written in. Thank you so much for your kind words! Your poetry is amazing, it's very touching and so beautiful!
Posted by: Aishah | October 03, 2013 at 12:54 PM
Wow... simply wow. I know that there are some that can remember from the womb but I can't, and that is probably for the best. Thank you so much for sharing this journey.
Posted by: Morgan Dragonwillow (@MDragonwillow) | October 03, 2013 at 06:09 PM
This poem sets a wonderful vision of first awareness of life as well as love and poetry. I enjoyed the rhythm of bum boom bum boom. Lovely!
Posted by: Beth Camp | October 03, 2013 at 06:34 PM
This gives me chills... in a very good way. Thank you for sharing.
Posted by: Esther Spurrill Jones | October 04, 2013 at 01:55 PM
I love the rhythm of this Julie. it's so lyrical - "my red blanket home..." Really, really lovely.
Posted by: elleroy was here | October 04, 2013 at 07:09 PM