Image by Mark Haley. Prompt inspiration: Magpie Tales
Promise breathes within the bleak sky
burnished grasses
the rarely walked upon path -
barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -
clouds pause -
hesitate before leaving -
wait before dropping
their punctuation upon -
this sacred scene
-- Julie Jordan Scott
Oh my. This is so very beautiful. I love it.
Posted by: brenda w | September 29, 2013 at 12:11 PM
gorgeous poem.
Posted by: Kathe W. | September 29, 2013 at 01:10 PM
I love the notion of clouds dropping punctuation...beautiful...
Posted by: Tess Kincaid | September 29, 2013 at 01:11 PM
really nice; have a good Sunday
much love...
Posted by: GILLENA COX | September 29, 2013 at 02:57 PM
WOW! "Hesitating clouds" ! And Yesss..that's what they DO--stop, like a hen laying eggs, then moving on, carrying less weight--grin!
ENJOYED this, JJS
Posted by: Steve E | September 29, 2013 at 05:52 PM
I love this line!!!
"barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -"
Awesome poem!
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