Promise Breathes: A Magpie Tales Inspired Poem

 

 

Image by Mark Haley. Prompt inspiration: Magpie Tales

 

Promise breathes within the bleak sky

burnished grasses

the rarely walked upon path -

barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -

clouds pause -

hesitate before leaving -

wait before dropping

their punctuation upon -

this sacred scene

 

-- Julie Jordan Scott

Comments

[brenda w]

Oh my. This is so very beautiful. I love it.

[Kathe W.]

gorgeous poem.

[Tess Kincaid]

I love the notion of clouds dropping punctuation...beautiful...

[GILLENA COX]

really nice; have a good Sunday

much love...

[Steve E]

WOW! "Hesitating clouds" ! And Yesss..that's what they DO--stop, like a hen laying eggs, then moving on, carrying less weight--grin!
ENJOYED this, JJS

[danadampier]

I love this line!!!
"barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -"

Awesome poem!

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[J Cosmo Newbery]

I can sort of see/hear druids in this!

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Love the clouds as punctuation!

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