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January 27, 2013

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Berowne

La melancholie, beautifully expressed...

zongrik

LOL!! I used the words vinyl and sleeve too. How could we resist?

Kathe W.

oh the melancholy of youth...well done

Helen

I read your comment on The Mag site ... I just saw 'Silver Linings Playbook' too. Love how the film inspired you ... I really enjoyed your poem and the film.

Anthony North

So much sadness in youth. You brought it out perfectly.

deana

Your use of emotion is really good!

Wayne

nicely done and thanks for sharing

Tess Kincaid

"Vinyl silence"...powerful...

Tumblewords

How lovely!

~T~

Poor thing. She should turn up the music and dance!

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