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December 30, 2012


Moe Lauher

Beautiful -


Moving, very well written...


Gentle, acrid kiss...the kiss of a smoker. I don't miss the stench. But your poem is a tender reminiscence.

Other Mary

But somehow

Well penned, that miserable feeling.


Vivid words .... so well done!

Happy New Year!!!

Theresa Milstein

I was moved too.

Favorite line: Gentle acrid kiss

Tess Kincaid


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