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October 21, 2012

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Morgan Dragonwillow

That is one thing I don't have to listen to any more. At one point in my life I said if I couldn't beat them I would join them and knew more about the game than he did.

Cheese... it makes me wonder who came up with it.

I can feel the tension in this poem, it pulled me in and through.

Peace to you friend.

Beth Camp

Oh for a room of your own -- far from football noise! I know the constant yammering of the 'game' well and actually followed Morgan's lead by learning a bit about the game. So I will watch now and then, just not all that often. Here, I love the burly men clambering up and down your spine; humor softens the bite in the poem. I wasn't sure about that jump sideways to cheese or why the narrator's face hurts, but this poem works for me!

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