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July 08, 2012

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Tess Kincaid

Sunflower pimples...unpopped popcorn...lots of goodies here...

Crazy, poetic life ~ Dana

Wow... this was written in a very interesting manner! I love it.

Grace

Nice poetry form ~ I like the yellowness, sunflower and popcorn ~

brian miller

lots of really good imagery in this...i really like the stanza on the words as well....it comes in at the right place for me and opens this up...

Sue

Well done. I always like this form.

=)

Karen S.

What a delightful read! Your last two lines are a perfect ending!

Tumblewords

Delicious imagery!

Linda Fraser

This poem breathes images of fresh country air. Thank you for sharing the form and your talent, Julie. I enjoyed your work.

Kutamun

You went through the field portal and took us to another realm, where it feels nice !, thanks

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