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October 19, 2011


andy sewina

Good thinking!

Anthony North

There's an intriguing sense of desolation to this I thought. Excellently done.

laurie kolp

Clever use of the words!

Sheilagh Lee

brilliantly done

Thomma Lyn

Such a sad, heart-tugging poem -- it speaks of a woman's sense of desperation and powerlessness in a situation that feels overwhelming.


Well-crafted poem, and excellent use of he three words...


Nicely crafted glimpse into the thought processes of the shy one. Really well written.


Sad but nicely captures the apprehension of a shy person...

The Cello Strings

love it,

Poets Rally


Hope all is well.

Noting that you have been part of poets rally in the year of 2011,
what an achievement, thanks for your outstanding contribution to us
along the way, keep up the excellence. Best!

Come join our poetry rally today if you wish to mingle and get inspired!

A poem of your choice or a free verse is accepted.

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

Looking forward to seeing you share.
Respect and hugs.

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