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August 21, 2011



EXCELLENT! This is really well written. You've nailed the prompt.

PS: I loved David Cassidy too, still do I guess LOL

Julie Jordan Scott

Hi Geraldine! I started writing it almost as a joke and then... I started really enjoying myself. Am grateful I found the prompt and wrote my way into it.

Ramesh Sood

I find it interesting and the end was more than that..

miss pie

it's all of that... great poem!!!!

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