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March 21, 2011

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Claudia

you got the form perfectly right julie - stable pentameter - not iambic but doesn't have to be - so that's fine
but you know what - i tried to sing your words in a waltz rhythm - and it was fun - fitting the words into this 3/4 meter...dance on..

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