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March 07, 2011

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bmackenzie

Love your photo it is as magical as the poem...love how you display the words on paper...happy grounded spring....nice triolet..bkm

shan

Do you know what? This is completely different to everything else I've read today, so inspiring and the artwork just blew me away to be fair!

Your iambs are crisp and stresses well laid out, very fluid and extremely moreish! Hope you join us again next week!

Patricia Caspers

This is exactly what I've been feeling, and I'm claiming some ground, too! Love the B line, "I name and gently hold what's here." Your artwork is also quite lovely.

Countess

I love (and greatly respect) your commitment to the form. The structure is a good balance against the chaos that is nature. This makes me hope Spring will come here soon...

Leah

yay for claiming ground!

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