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February 25, 2011

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mark

This sort of sneaks up on the reader. At least it snuck up on me.

Good word choices here.

Joseph Harker

That stewing in the gravy of excess ____ really charmed me for no particular reason... a peculiar and unique metaphor for a peculiar and unique sight. :)

pamela

Julie, some very interesting images in this piece.
Well done.

barbara

ah, yes. I recognize the tarnished mood far too well.

Tumblewords

Interesting imagery - I love stewing in the gravy of anxiety!

Uma Gowrishankar

Julie, I love the mood and tone of your poem.

Madeleine Begun Kane

Fascinating! And I loved the "stew in the gravy
of excess" refrain. Delicious!

Deb

Such a strange experience, to not catalog the wonder, and tell it so well!

carolee

what an interesting moment!

Laurie Kolp

I love this:

"I want to stew
in the gravy
of excess worry"

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