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February 25, 2011



This sort of sneaks up on the reader. At least it snuck up on me.

Good word choices here.

Joseph Harker

That stewing in the gravy of excess ____ really charmed me for no particular reason... a peculiar and unique metaphor for a peculiar and unique sight. :)


Julie, some very interesting images in this piece.
Well done.


ah, yes. I recognize the tarnished mood far too well.


Interesting imagery - I love stewing in the gravy of anxiety!

Uma Gowrishankar

Julie, I love the mood and tone of your poem.

Madeleine Begun Kane

Fascinating! And I loved the "stew in the gravy
of excess" refrain. Delicious!


Such a strange experience, to not catalog the wonder, and tell it so well!


what an interesting moment!

Laurie Kolp

I love this:

"I want to stew
in the gravy
of excess worry"

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