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December 16, 2010

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meirozavian

Brilliant idea Jul, beautiful words. I LIKE IT.

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Wiah-- I love the juxtaposition of these characters!

Scent of my heart

Nice story in words! Perfect Rally contribution! Thanks for the visit to my blog! Happy holidays!

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kim Nelson

Oh! I like this! I am my worst person when driving and in traffic. I will remember this piece the next time I see my own "dead woman" coming out. Great bit of writing!

Harshika

why such a dark choice of topic? :(

nice write :)

Gemma @ Greyscale

This poem has dramatic guts, right to the last bristly line! Powerful!

Brennan Bogert

I like the anonymity of the "dead woman" it seems more fitting and descripitive to call her that rather than "she" "her" "the mother." It's a great poem.

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