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October 16, 2010

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Manasi Diwakar

This is completely unique take on the Magpie...
"dried up rose petal word showers" made me smile...

Beautiful!:):)

Berowne

"...made her soul skin shout."
Creative, imaginative -- good.

Kristen Haskell

Lovely writing.

brian

i agree it is certainly unique...it sounds like my wife in the mornings when i get up...always tempting me to stay...

Tumblewords

I can relate - totally! Nicely worded.

Reflections

Very creative take on this magpie... different but well written in its expression.

Nicely done.

Michael Wells

Julie - enjoyed the read. Nice work!

Dick

Sharp, witty and beautifully worded. A clever take on the prompt.

Ada Trellis

I agree with Brian. The Reluctant Slug-a-Bed sounds like my husband, Caddoc Trellis.

bkmackenzie

Wonderful read for a Sunday morning...wish I could stay in those sheets too...but I have to get dressed now...nice Magpie..bkm

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