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October 10, 2010

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Jingle

beautiful,
love the water and the sunset in your images...
your poem makes it more profound to be there...
Happy Potluck!

Teresa

Interesting! Makes one think.

bkmackenzie

I felt you in my womb: a salty cradle ...lovely image of the water that gives us and is our life blood....nice write...bkm

Shigune Matsui

I think that it is cool! Love it for its visual words! Here's mine http://thelunaticsdiary.blogspot.com/2010/10/wimderfehl-and-lovelorn.html

dasuntoucha

...the fog the sunset the light mist
the unseeing clarity that comes
and goes with the tides, in and out
and large and mottled against my skin
we greet each other once again...

...beautiful lines...serene piece of writing.

Shashi

Beautiful... leaving,arriving, healing and growing... I liked the metaphor of hat... Thanks for sharing...

जय दुर्गा जी, जय काली माँ
Jai Durga ji, Jai Kali Ma
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Amanda

Your words have touced me...I loved every word from start to we greet each other once again!! Awesome writing and so very well penned my friend...thanks so much for linking with Potluck!! Hugs xxx

fiveloaf

nice..

Lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com

Ah, now this is beautiful, Julie. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you. And I see you too write villanelles, rondel/triolet/rondeaus? Do you do sonnets also? Villanelles my favourite. I have yet to do a pantoum, but will soon I hope. I think the crazy sestina can wait. Let's not forget the free-verse and blank-verse... if I get too obsessed with form I start writing from my head and not my heart.

Warmest Salad

Luke @ WordSalad

Talon

"a salty cradle" - what a fabulous image!

What an amazing poem. Enjoyed it immensely!

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