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October 03, 2010

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Jingle

open arms, smile. shoulders release...

wow.
love it!
have fun today!

Amanda

I have never tried this format and you have done it to perfection, so very clever!! Thanks so much for linking with Potluck xx

Teresa

That is a new style to me, and I loved this. It really was great!

Shashi

Interesting...

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Bob Messer

"Smile wellspring" I love that image. Thanks for this poem -- and for the form -- which is new to me (:

K A Shaw

I love the way you say so much and yet in so little words. excellent kx

Victoria

Well done. I love writing etheree but never tried the inverted.

Jingle

support us by visiting a few poets near your entry.
thanks for the contribution…

here is one of mine:
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/04/what-can-you-see/

Nellyulima

oh i love the visual i got with this.. what happened to the earrings? exhaled them to the wind?

Ana Goncalves

Very beautiful indeed. :) Small world that we are part of the same circle of Poetry: Jingle's connection of friends. Many blessings to you dear friend. Hope you are well.

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