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September 27, 2010

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Lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com

Do it! hehe. The fear... the 'stuff' as you say. "Auditory" "Ummmm" > loved that. Best thing I ever learnt from those Creative Writing classes at University was the lesson: "Don't get it right, get it written". Easier said than done, sometimes I know, and everyone has deeper/different levels of 'stuff'. But once it's just damn well down in black and white, and not chancing fragments of lines, ideas swirling in a tentative mind, then one can edit till it's perfect. If you got nothing down, there's nothing to work with.

Enjoyed this visit to your blog

Warmest Salad

Luke

Jingle

creepy piece,
yet apt and lovely wording...
thanks for sharing.

amanda

"Auditory" "Ummmm" My breath stutters
Wonderful Stuff! this was an excellent read!

siubhan

haunting the way you step outside yourself to take in this perspective. i hear you--sometimes it's easier to look anywhere but within, to where all the "stuff" is quietly threatening to overwhelm...

Kavita

This also brought up "stuff" in me ! And it REALLY gave me the chills too! Plus, the picture you've put up totally adds to the effect! All in all, brilliant!
When those ghosts begin to haunt you, everything (including writing) seems like a really tall ask!
A very very well penned piece! Thanks for sharing it with Poetry Potluck (albeit grudgingly :))... EXCELLENT!

Jingle

another breath taking piece.
Thanks for sharing...

love to see you with perfect muses...
Cheers!

Talon

I'm so glad you "grudingly" wrote this because it's so layered and so intriguing! Oh, those ghosts can be hard to ignore, can't they?

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