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September 13, 2010

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Jingle

yes, television with remove control,
I am in your room with everything around...

vivid and lovely poem!

Jingle

Thank you so very much for joining us...
Happy Monday.

Hope that you enjoy a treats from fellow poets.
have fun!

love your image,
beautiful tour!

Julie Jordan Scott

Thank you, Jingle. I am so grateful for your new community!

Eric Alder

I see I'm not the only one inspired by coffee.

Thanks for passing this dish for the potluck!

RiikaInfinityy

Great read :D~ I am drifting around the room :3

Thank for sharing this wonderful poem, happy poetry potluck^^~

brokenpenwriter

Oh how familiar this sounds!! Do all of us writers have a control-wielding TV junkie in our houses while we try to control our own urge for coffee? I love the way you paint the picture and express the anxiety, then the peace - ahhh escape - of writing.

Amanda

I am addicted to coffee I think...beautifully crafted and thanks so much for linking with Potluck. Hugs xx

mm

Wow-- the murkiness of what you hint at is so intriguing-- the secret life of the poem's persona leads the reader down a mysterious path. I put a couple of my sonnets from last year into the Potluck from my 1-a-week stash, both on the theme of mystery and contemplation of the unknowable. Enjoyed this alot!

Talon

The last stanza is so sad...and the love slipping into the sunset is such great imagery.

Kavita

Oh my.. this was such a lovely read, albeit sad towards the end, but beautiful nonetheless!!
The ultimate separation and distance between a poet and the muse - (sigh) .. well, that's how I looked at it here.. I might be totally off though..

In any case, it was an absolute stunner! Aah...coffee..
Thanks for sharing this brew at our poetry potluck!! It smelt and tasted delicious!

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