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September 22, 2010

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Nimue

this is so so brilliant !! so many images , yet a complete picture in itself :)

Deborah

I agree with Nimue, very well written! :o)

SpareaWord

The glandular nudge... WOW. Nice write. Love and Light, Sender

Gary Baker

I enjoyed that too - nice sounds when read out loud.

Sweetest in the Gale

I loved the rhythm of this poem, and the yearning behind the words.

ThomG

you can so feel the teen angst in this. So well done.

Tumblewords

Ah, I like this a lot!

Thomma Lyn

What an insightful look into the mind of a young girl. Well-done!

pia

It's high school redeux. Love the imagery--can see it, and feel it

christopher

This is quite good. I am not sure what to say except that it nudged me, and changed the gait that my soul has been using this morning as I shop around the 3WW site for the ones I like best. My quest will run out of time soon, before I can finish but I think I like you best for now. I was going to use the word ripen too, but couldn't figure out how to get it there...:D

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