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July 21, 2010

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Leo

hmm, jumping into a sad novel perhaps?

K

And I lie on my back and float on the waves...

Beautiful and lyrical.
Thanks

ThomG

This sprouts a perfect picture in my mind as I read.

Anthony North

This sounds like great inspiration to me.

lissa

I like it, it makes me think of someone or some creature starting something and not something new

Toi

love, very soft.

mark

wonderful, Julie. Pulls you right in.

shail

That's neat play of words and evokes a picture. :)

Amity

what with the moist, it must have worked, the pencil made magic!!!

so tricky and interesting take Julie!

Gemma@Greyscale

The power of metaphor is like widening water circles - tempting pleasures of luxurious words!

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