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July 16, 2010

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pamela

Julie honestly I cannot find the code but I love the poem!
Pamela

Robert Lloyd

This is a very beautiful poem and I love it all the more that its inspired by your fornt porch and you have a picture to show it!! I have read it three times now. Thank you for sharing.

twitches

Hm, not sure if there;s a code here or not, but I do love the imagery and the short short lines, the poem really "falls" down the page, like unwrapping it as you scroll along.

Zouxzoux

Sweet words but the secret stays hidden. Good work!

Elizabeth

Each day is a new beginning and the sunrise umwraps the me who will live it. That's what I got from the poem and the photo. But, that doesn't matter. The poem is lyrical as it moves down the page, like a confident woman who has just awakened to stride into the sunlight.

Elizabeth

brenda w

I get strong impressions of a painting in the first stanza. Maybe you are opening a piece of art? Strong images are at play here, I love it!

Tumblewords

The beautiful unwrapping of a lovely day!

Robin

Really lovely. So important to greet the new day, each one a gift.

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