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June 17, 2010

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Dina Spice

Intriguing... I love that it took three looks, and also the flow of those words after that third look.

Great Magpie, Julie!

- Dina

Stan Ski

He must have been someone special.

willow

....I don't know....Omar Shariff is pretty sexy.

Barbara

One of my favorites....Doctor Zhivago...bkm

Berowne

Says a lot in a few words. Congratulations.

brenda w

Well done, Julie. That Omar Shariff air...
The river pictures are beautiful, too. Love them.

brenda w

Well done, Julie. That Omar Shariff air...
The river pictures are beautiful, too. Love them.

Helen

Fiction that would be a lovely reality...very nice Magpie!

Alexis @ Finding Prose

This has a lovely rhythm.
Loved how you ended it,
"Lip I had bit the moment I didn’t
Recognize him at first"

brian miller

love those last lines...nice magpie!

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