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April 27, 2010


Mark Lysgaard

Nice use of the acrostic style. I like how you've woven it into a story of your personal experience.

Nice work!



I really enjoyed reading this piece! I love how you used Acrostic style poetry to portray your personal experiences. As for my poem, it really is just something I thought about during a discussion that was going on in one of my teaching education courses. I just read the prompt on poetic asides, and it does fit in with the prompt, but I didn't knowingly use the prompt. Thanks for your comment and nice work!

Dan Rako

Life's crashes often lead to real and meaningful growth, like pruning an unruly tree.

J D Mackenzie

Love the first word in the first line and it only got better. Anthem-like. Your poem inspired.


well done...thanks for sharing this

Laura Kayne

Lovely poem. Very powerful use of imagery and I love the parallels between the beginning and the end, showing how the narrator has moved on.


Well said, with the "limitations" of acrostics - I like your rhythm, your awareness of it, the little tension between jambling and playing with the flow then letting it go.

Intrigued to find out what you will come up with for Intuition... Thank you.

Andy Sewina

Yeah, great response to the prompt, and I quite like the opening line/announcement...


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