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April 09, 2010

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pamela

Julie,
I love this part especially
"By the shards tearing at my skin and I whisper-shout"
Well done!
Pamela

Julie Jordan Scott

Pamela - that was part of a poem I threw out, originally. Glad you like it!

Robin

Well done! Love the final 6-7 lines, which really are powerful.

Nellsberry

Yep definitely makes it worth it! Nice to hear from you. :)

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