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April 28, 2010


Anthony North

This was such an original take on departed love. Excellent.


Well done!
You did so well in just a few lines!


Very well done. I love the imagery.


Those memories take a lot of igniting. lol Very creative.

Andy Sewina

Nicely, it's true how a persons smell lingers, and can come back to haunt you.


Ooh, a very strong feeling in such a little push and meager flaming.

Nara Malone

like this "departing ex-whatever"

Six emotionally dense lines.

Thomma Lyn

Oooh, an excellent and intense take on the words.


O a dark and grizzly atmosphere where even the candle becomes a weapon!


personal rituals we use to move on - I agree, very intense!

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