A Mistake - My First Ever Three Word Wednesday Poem

This is my first attempt at writing a Three Word Wednesday poem. I enjoy writing challenges and this was a pleasure to write and surprisingly swift. I look forward to returning in the weeks to come and supporting the other poets who write there.

 

With each tug

You drain me

 

Your epic

Commitment to

 

Being in pain

Nibbles at my

 

Devotion to you

Making it so much

 

easier to

Say…. I made

 

a mistake….

Comments

[Hal Johnson]

I've always felt like a caveman when it comes to poetry, so I'll just say that I liked this.

[Anthony North]

Nicely done for your first 3ww. It's always fun, and a good challenge, here.

[Neil Reid]

Proving that simplicity can be perfect eloquence!

[ThomG]

you've captured some pain and unrest here simply and elegantly.

Welcome to 3WW and I hope you'll come around and be a regular. And, tell you friends. We're always looking for more fun.

[Jay Thurston]

This is short and sweet, you say a lot with a little. I enjoyed it.

[Percy Bisque Silley]

A mistake indeed! You must try the far more formidable Chicken format.

[Amarettogirl]

Hi! So intriguing to read your first 3ww poem, and a wonderful one at that. love the 'Being a pain nibbles at my...' line! Thank you for sharing this with us.:))

[Just Someone]

That was a great start for your 3WW! A wonderful piece...

thanks for sharing

[Jeeves]

Ouch! Thats lot said

[Tim Remo]

Simply and powerful. A great first try at 3WW. I hope to read more of your work.