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the image I "see" is this:
falling backwards into a feather bed
allowing myself the free tumble
knowing all the while
I will be better than fine
when my head hits the pillow
and my heart hits the quilt
Posted at 02:11 PM | Permalink
oh...you sound like a fairy :)
October 04, 2013 at 02:38 PM
Very nice! I love "my heart hits the quilt". Makes me see a handmade quilt given to you by someone dear.
October 04, 2013 at 05:28 PM
Any poem that celebrates quilts and feathers is just fine! Very gentle. I loved it. PS I'm a quilter. :)
Beth Camp |
October 04, 2013 at 06:45 PM
Ah yes, the image of the sweet feather bed, love it!
Morgan Dragonwillow (@MDragonwillow) |
October 04, 2013 at 08:44 PM
I love the "free tumble" part. xoA
October 04, 2013 at 08:53 PM
It is my shortest poem of the month. I just couldn't seem to plan a poem or be at all intellectual with my poem for my own prompt! LOL. Thank you for your comments, very much!
Julie Jordan Scott |
October 05, 2013 at 10:26 AM
"...my heart hits the quilt" Such a great line. This was so comforting and soothing. Exhale. Sigh. Relaxation! You described it so well, I could picture myself just falling onto that comfy bedding and drifting off. Isn't that just the stuff of fantasy now? Just being able to drift off to a comforting rest after a long, arduous day?
elleroy was here |
October 05, 2013 at 06:47 PM
I know I left a comment to this, but it's not here? I said some thing like - "Oh, the free of freedom," because this is how it made me feel. X
shah wharton |
October 08, 2013 at 08:35 AM
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