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Promise breathes within the bleak sky
the rarely walked upon path -
barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -
clouds pause -
hesitate before leaving -
wait before dropping
their punctuation upon -
this sacred scene
-- Julie Jordan Scott
Posted at 10:29 AM in Magpie Tales, poem, poetry | Permalink
Oh my. This is so very beautiful. I love it.
brenda w |
September 29, 2013 at 12:11 PM
Kathe W. |
September 29, 2013 at 01:10 PM
I love the notion of clouds dropping punctuation...beautiful...
Tess Kincaid |
September 29, 2013 at 01:11 PM
really nice; have a good Sunday
GILLENA COX |
September 29, 2013 at 02:57 PM
WOW! "Hesitating clouds" ! And Yesss..that's what they DO--stop, like a hen laying eggs, then moving on, carrying less weight--grin!
ENJOYED this, JJS
Steve E |
September 29, 2013 at 05:52 PM
I love this line!!!
"barren trees sing, even when naked of leaves -"
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September 29, 2013 at 09:07 PM
I can sort of see/hear druids in this!
J Cosmo Newbery |
September 30, 2013 at 04:14 AM
Love the clouds as punctuation!
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