Today's Poem was born via photo prompt from the Sunday Challenge from One Stop Poetry. I love this photo (copyright and courtesy of Chris Galford). I didn't feel like it needed a lot of words so I chose with care and intention. Looking forward to reading the other contributions!
Hissing blue adrenaline on concrete Ideas spread their word, their view their being-ness takes form freedom bandits call it cement thievery Bright flames sing, give voice to the speechless Hissing gold adrenaline on concrete
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Julie Jordan Scott
Love that shot too and your words are quite compatible.
much enjoyed your poem!!
Posted by: lynne | June 19, 2011 at 12:27 PM
"Hissing blue adrenaline on concrete"... what a great opening line! Nice how it changes to gold by the end. Very cool
Posted by: dustus | June 19, 2011 at 12:32 PM
You framed that in quite nicely...cement thieves...goood.
Posted by: Jerry | June 20, 2011 at 05:03 AM
Many great lines and work choics, but freedon bandits I thought was way kool. Excellent.
http://henryclemmonspoet.blogspot.com/2011/06/my-andela.html
Posted by: Henry Clemmons | June 20, 2011 at 08:14 PM
I like the ideas that find their way into your poem their being-ness takes form, Julie, and how they are called: "freedom bandits call it cement thievery"! Quite an unique but awesome take.
Thanks for your lovely comment in jornales!
Posted by: Alegria Imperial | June 21, 2011 at 08:49 AM