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November 13, 2010

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Cynthia Short

I LIKE the dark bitterness! I especially like the section describing the priest, "door latch made from bones of his words"...left me quite a picture!

Tumblewords

Wonderfully powerful imagery!

Amanda

Boy you were not kidding about stirring up some anger I can feel the intensity in this the demand for attention to your words! Fabulous writing!

Cindy Veach

wow such energy here - love the way it builds and builds.

Deb

I like the sharpness, too. "Door latch made with/ bones of his words" is an incredible image ... really got to me.

vivienne blake

You sure did let rip! Very clever writing, and twisting of the titles. I found " the art of poetry is not made to be solely Your Confessional" particularly salutary.

anne

Oooh, this is really wonderful!

Victoria Ceretto-Slotto

Strong, thought-provoking poem, Julie. Nicely done.

https://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/2010/11/13/worth-dying-for-big-tent-poetry/

Ramesh Sood

A lovely poem this.. I have enjoyed it.. and the conclusion.. and ending.. the way we live. wow! and thanks for your encouraging comment on my page..

david waters

clever and powerful. I like :)

cheers

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