Purple covers daisies
White fights back
"Oh, to be seen..." the
daisies whisper, back of the hand
to their petal foreheads they
recline, fading...
I sigh.
I may find I love it.
Friendship's beginnings at
Goodwill, Northwest.
Hands clasped and voice
rejoiced, "PERFECT!" crafted,
I imagine, at last generation's
wood shop. A couple coats
of 70's era colors and
I may find I love it
daisies and used nightly
onstage to bring a more
than slightly crazed loving
much psychologist to life
now, the 70's yellow and
orange turns pale purple
I may find I love it
Still wet, I write into
the what was knowing
one student's A- or B+
project will once
more be well loved, so
its hoped, help ideas
spring to life between
blue lines
I may find I love it
Splash itself into
word docs and powerpoints
Blogs or scripts and
books or poemsa and perhaps
just perhaps
come back to life
on stage
once
again

Really quaint, I loved it! The layout works well for it.
http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/11/28/sister/
Posted by: Jessica | November 29, 2010 at 10:54 AM
I like it, although I got a little lost in there... But I loved the first stanza so much - those poor daisies - and then the repetition throughout of "I may find I love it."
Posted by: Ruth | November 29, 2010 at 11:35 AM
Interesting! Happy potluck!
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Posted by: lynnaima | November 29, 2010 at 12:13 PM
Liked the first stanza in particular... I do enjoy my Julie Jordan Scott Visits. So you write rondelet too? I write in many forms, rondelet about to try one. Have done its brothers and sisters rondeau, rondel and triolet though. And LOVE the villanelle, my favourite of the old forms. Got a sonnet, a ballad and free verse this week
Warmest Salad
Luke @ WordSalad
(mine are here -
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/11/26/descent-2/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/06/64/
http://lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com/2010/05/30/mud-pies/
Posted by: Lukepraterswordsalad.wordpress.com | November 29, 2010 at 12:41 PM
love the colors,
and your creativity is a bliss to me.
divine entry,
thanks for sharing your work with potluck..
xxx
Posted by: Jingle | November 29, 2010 at 05:28 PM
Sometimes a bit of restoration is necessary to bring the old back to life and renew its energy. Especially for old props. Nice job of restoration and an excellent poem as well.
Posted by: dan | November 29, 2010 at 07:41 PM
I really enjoyed the first stanza...what a great word picture!
Posted by: Nolina Estuary | November 30, 2010 at 07:47 AM
Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy
Thank you a ton for the lovely contribution!
Happy Friday!
See you next time!
Posted by: Jingle | December 03, 2010 at 10:31 AM
I may find I love it... no I for sure love it! Well done!
Posted by: Scent of my heart | December 04, 2010 at 12:23 AM
Greetings! How r u?
You are invited to join our potluck week 13 at Jingle Poetry : http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/
Write a poem fitting our week 13 theme (Dreams, Visions, Reveries), post it, and link in to our potluck, you are also allowed to link in unrelated poems. we are open Sunday, 8pm, American central time.
We have had so much fun having you last week. I cannot wait seeing you on coming Monday again.
Let me know if you have questions.
Have A Weekend As Graceful As Your Writing!
xoxox
Posted by: Scent of my heart | December 04, 2010 at 12:23 AM