Brown eyes hold worry
her diamond bands can't deflect
Saints around her wrist
hush the baby in her womb
Plaid shirt wearing husband's
comfort doesn't calm her
her diamond bands can't deflect
Saints around her wrist
hush the baby in her womb
Plaid shirt wearing husband's
comfort doesn't calm her
that's animated and fun 160 writing,
I love the adjectives you have applied here.
way to go!
Posted by: Jingle | August 29, 2010 at 04:40 PM
A moment of vulnerability captured with grace. Lovely 160.
Posted by: Cheryl | August 29, 2010 at 04:48 PM
Tender poignant, living life from the depths of the soul.
Beautiful.
Joanny
Posted by: joanny | August 29, 2010 at 05:36 PM
Quite a picture you paint in your 160 characters. Thanks for playing and have a great Sunday.
Posted by: Monkey Man | August 29, 2010 at 08:16 PM
I sense a back story here. Your words carry worry and uncertainty, and maybe fear. Powerful 160.
Posted by: Patti | August 29, 2010 at 08:31 PM
Ohh my ... felt the tension building up!!!
It was so wonderfully conveyed!
But once it's over, she will be smiling about it :)
A lovely 160..
Posted by: Kavita | August 29, 2010 at 10:48 PM
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/08/30/thursday-poets-rally-week-27-awards/
Poets Rally Week 27 awards,
All 5 4 u, enjoy!
Happy Monday,
Rally week 28 will be September 9-15…..Welcome!
Posted by: Jingle | August 30, 2010 at 08:09 AM
quite a sensitive 160 you've written there
Posted by: Claudia | August 30, 2010 at 09:59 AM