Today's poem was birthed
through Three Word Wednesday's prompting of:
"Hassle, Inject, Wealth"
The
Last Original
She could feel the haughtiness
In his stare inject itself
A syringe of judgment
Directly into her sternum
Before her shoulders shifted
She tossed out the thought,
“Is it worth the hassle to
invoke the
culture of wealth?” before it
quickly evaporated
A syringe of judgment - clever phrase! Nifty piece...
Posted by: Tumblewords | July 01, 2010 at 04:47 PM
Hi Julie Jordan scot
Thanks for visiting me.. I have been a regular on OSI.. It was my first attempt on 3ww...
Well like the end of your poem.. when its a syringe of judgement it is better to remain hassle-free.. I agree and very true.. keep in touch..
Posted by: Ramesh Sood | July 02, 2010 at 10:53 AM
Great lines in this.
Posted by: ThomG | July 03, 2010 at 08:12 AM
Nicely done Julie, interesting use for the words this week. Well done!
Posted by: Jay Thurston | July 03, 2010 at 08:13 AM