I wasn’t expecting this to happen: a poem to be born, much less a metrical Pantoum style poem, to be inspired from a photo taken on yesterday’s walk with Hank. I should learn not to question my inner muses and instead, just take their dictation when offered – so, here it is, for you (and them, both the flowers and their coaxing…)
See the optimism in their reach
Power to wilt them, overhead near
Don't shirk, a giggle is their speech
Never bend - trumpet "We're here!"
Power to wilt them, overhead near
Hold on without the stress of too tight
Never bend - trumpet "We're here!"
Greenery seems to take up, bird's flight
Hold on without the stress of too tight
Without the clutch of electrical wood
Greenery seems to take up, bird's flight
They shouldn't or wouldn't even could
Without the clutch of electrical wood
Orphaned sky reachers, left far below
They shouldn't or wouldn't even could
No more deep blue to the clouds, bestow
Orphaned sky reachers, left far below
Crawl on the grass for the root of the peach
No more deep blue to the clouds, bestow
See the optimism in their reach

I love morning glory.It is classified as a noxious weed here but there are still pockets here and there It features in my poetry.Pantoums are fun.You did a good job of yours.I'm writing a villanelle next week.
cheers
rall
Posted by: rallentanda | October 29, 2009 at 06:16 AM