I experiment with poetic forms as a regular practice in hopes of improving all of my writing, not just the poetic side of me. In September, I am turning to Terza Rima. And after reviewing the link about Terza Rima, I realize... I have done it all wrong!
Funny! On so many levels. I will definitely go back and rewrite and begin again. Giggling at me... and here is the link so you may see how one writes Terza Rima correctly!
She woke me with her ranting call
Destructive force within child-like frame
I retreat beneath my blanket wall
One might say impetuousness a favored game
For once, just for once, delight me
Must I blow with forced wind gales?
I want to love you, can’t you see?
Press my chest against wide white sails
The alternative is to give up.
Just give up. Which I will not do.
Late night frightened whining pup
Not now or then. Not ever. Not true.
When I detangle my words
Will they lose luster or spray?
Move them around the page
I can not worry, I must obey
The call to end this poem line
And hopefully, soon – grow a spine
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